Film Noir Journal #2

Edwin and I have been working very hard on our assignment. We changed the story well some of it. We added a lot to our story. We gave Neena a reason why to kill Isabella. Its been kind of hard to write the beat-sheet because Edwin knows the story and he has the story. I haven't been able to work on it as much as him because he has the story and he is always busy. I feel like our story is very good but I think we can still improve it.