Film Noir Journal #2

Edwin and I have been working very hard on our assignment. We changed the story well some of it. We added a lot to our story. We gave Neena a reason why to kill Isabella. Its been kind of hard to write the beat-sheet because Edwin knows the story and he has the story. I haven't been able to work on it as much as him because he has the story and he is always busy. I feel like our story is very good but I think we can still improve it.

Film Noir

Writing a Film Noir is alot differs then writing any kind of regular story. This type of story needs certain key things in order for it to be a Film Noir. I feel that this is the hardest project we have I had. I think it is hard because you have to include so much in the storing when you are writing it. Edwin and I thought we had a good story at first but then we found out that we were wrong. I noticed that many people were having trouble writing a Film Noir. I think the fact that we are on watching Film Noir movies it will help us get many ideas. This might be alittle hard at first but I feel like after a while we will get used to the way a Film Noir is suppose to be written.